Light Picture It & Write


I’m falling on the edge of the abyss
I’m muddled but don’t want to give it a miss
I do not lead a holy life and I feel guilty
I come to you and need your advice badly
My flesh is weak and I’m drifting away
I acted like a fool and I was led astray
It was a pretty tame affair but still hidden
What was done couldn’t be undone
A secret so to speak in the mist of tides
I wish I could just take them in strides
I know this too will pass but I need the light
Light at the end of the tunnel for my plight


by brenda warren


For: Picture it & Write and Wordle 226


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  1. Jae Rose · November 22, 2015

    Whatever our plight we sometimes need a helping hand to help us find the light….beautifully and honestly written

    Liked by 1 person

  2. joetwo · November 22, 2015

    Nice rhymes, well done!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Misky · November 23, 2015

    There’s some lovely internal and end-line rhymes – nicely done.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Bastet · November 24, 2015

    This write has good rhythm to it and your rhymes are flawless .. nicely done … a hope the answers some day come to the writer … 😉

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